She’d been waiting all her life for this one moment, the
moment she’d finally regain herself. Take back what had been taken from her.
Control. She knew once she did, all those years would fall away like the dying
scales from a dragon and she’d be reborn. A new woman. A different woman. A
woman that no man would ever take advantage of again.
Taking a deep breath, she pushed the heavy oak door open and
an almost inaudible whisper of air wafted back and tickled her hose clad legs.
And there he was. The man who had agreed to play her victim.
Her shiny red heels sent up a series of clacks against the
hard, wood floor like gun shots ringing out and she swore he flinched with every
step. As she crossed the room it became a game and she altered her steps,
walking without rhythm, just to watch him squirm.
Then she was there. Right behind him and a smile quirked up
the edges of her lips as beads of sweat trickled down his temple and were
absorbed by the silky black material covering his eyes. He was simply delicious
hanging there chained between two posts by wrists and ankles and the oddest
thing happened. Liz’ mouth watered and ached.
She unfurled the whip in her hand and sent it through the
air with a loud crack.
“Just so there are no misunderstandings, are you sure?” Liz
asked, her whole body thrumming with need.
“Yes, Mistress.”
“Wonderful.”
...I really could have gone on and on, but you know the rules of flash fiction. Of course, Liz is now in a to be continued file...So, for stopping by and seeing me today I'm offering a chance at a $10.00 Amazon gift card. And how does one enter? Simply leave me some comment lovin'. Tell me if you own some red heels and if not, do you want some now? ;)
Thanks for coming by! And be sure to go back to Rebel Ink Press to keep hopping!
Lila
Ooh...I can't wait for Liz to escape from her "to be continued file.."
ReplyDeleteI own red shoes...at least 5 pairs but sadly none are heels!
Hugs xx
foulkes.susan@gmail.com
I did a piece for my newsletter that my husband really dug, so I might just incorporate the red heels with that cougar piece and have a really good time. ;) I own so many shoes it's a shame really, but oddly none are red. Think I need to rectify this abomination! :)
DeleteEvery girl needs a pair of red shoes!
ReplyDeleteIndeed she does, Abby! I have some cool leopard print ones...love those shoes!
DeleteHappy to see that Liz's story will be continued.
ReplyDeleteI don't own red heels, I love them though there is a pair at the mall here I love but after five minutes in them I'd likely be at the ER for a sprained ankle at the least.
tiffanykrepps @ gmail . com
Hi Tiffany! Well, just in confidence you really don't have to be adept at walking in them, just adept at making them look good. ;)
Deletemmmm I love it!
ReplyDeleteHi my friend! Thanks. ;) I think she does something very wicked with the point of that heel a bit later...
DeleteYAY, a Domme! Woo-hoo! This'll be fun...
ReplyDeletevitajex(at)aol(dot)com
Hey Vitajex! Yes, I'm slowly wandering that way. My readers asked and I'm trying to answer. :) In fact, you'll be happy to know my second Toy Box Tale is a Domme story...Jodi Sandoval is going to get her man!
ReplyDelete"As she crossed the room it became a game and she altered her steps, walking without rhythm, just to watch him squirm."
ReplyDeleteMy favorite line, it pulled me right into her head. :)
Thank you Eden! And thanks for stopping by...I kind of like imagining him squirm...;)
DeleteThose red shoes are hot! It sounds like you have another story brewing!
ReplyDeleteHey Melissa! Oh, honey, I have a dozen brewing. :) Am working on the blurb this afternoon for my next Toy Box Tale and it's about a Domme--she's a Marine and her ex-husband sub is a Delta...very interesting ;) He is of course the one that got it last night after the spilled soup incident. Ha!
DeleteMMM...Mistress...love it
ReplyDeleteHey Sue! I didn't really think I could switch gears and write a Domme, but yeah for flash fic showing me otherwise. :)
DeleteLove it!!! Love the shoes but I would totally kill myself in them. :)
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goodblinknpark@ yahoo.com
Hi Amber! Glad you enjoyed it and like I said earlier today...;) You don't have to walk in them, just make them look good...
DeleteI am a lover of red heels, I think they are so sexy but can't walk in them. But I just might have to invest in a pair.
ReplyDeletevampiremistress2010(at)gmail(dot)com
Hello Mistress ;) So glad you happened by and read my little tale and it enticed you to do some shoe shopping.
ReplyDeleteThat was just not enough words! Liz can't stay in the to be continued file long, we need more!
ReplyDeletesuz2(at)cox(dot)net
Hi Susan! I know right? I've really got to let her speak her mind very soon...thanks for stopping by! ;)
DeleteHi! Loved the teaser! Are you planning on turning this into a book? You should! ;) Thanks for sharing and for the awesome hop! Have a great night!
ReplyDeleteshadowluvs2read(at)gmail(dot)com
Dayum! Loved it! I don't own heels but love how sexy and gorgeous they look. Can't walk in them!
ReplyDeletenancy777ca@yahoo.ca
Hi Shadow! Hi E! Thanks for coming by and so glad you enjoyed Liz' little bit. Shadow she is in the TBC pile and will be dusted off at some point and given a story. Hey, E, ;) dont' need to walk in them, just make them look gorgeous. :)
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