Sunday, May 20, 2012

Switching Gears...Six From WIP, Assumed Calling, Book 5, Identity Series...


Nicki made her way to the edge of the bed and sat tentatively on the edge of it, wondering what exactly Allen intended to do with her since he’d sent her to his room. Was he going to claim her? She didn’t even know him, but her body apparently didn’t care if her reaction to him touching her was any kind of indicator.
Without warning, all of the sights, sounds, and smells came crashing down on her at once and a lump the size of a boulder lodged in her throat. Terrified of it all, Nicki crawled into the middle of the bed, hugged herself, and let the tears come. Tears that had been stuck inside her for far too long.

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Lila

5 comments:

  1. Sounds like she's dealing with a lot of inner turmoil. Nice six! :)

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  2. Great six. I really felt her uncertainty and her anguish.

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  3. Awww...heart-wrenching six...beautifully written.

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  4. I feel so sad for her! I hope she gets some comforting soon. Very evocative six!

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